Post by tommy2010 on Dec 17, 2010 2:18:14 GMT -5
Please read/critique this poem?
the house (of) leaves
houses vanish
openly, closing off,
leaving in the night, folded cards still
enigmatic, an elegance which in(itial) description
shows its cause.
Iolanthe,
nun alone in that house, though
tsarina over all, and
helped by others,
(Eos and phosphor, radium, oil and candles)
spends her dreams exploring,
keyholes muttering back
“into this house none shall enter.”
Estranged, she looks out the window to see the (fall)
sun delay the dark for the last time,
appearing frail,
no flame left,
dropping low. She watches the fall from
saintly grace. Ancient grace, from time of apples,
ewes, birthright, names like Cain or
Aaron, sun and dust: she sees the fall;
synesthesia between sight and sigh.
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modded xbox 360 controller
the house (of) leaves
houses vanish
openly, closing off,
leaving in the night, folded cards still
enigmatic, an elegance which in(itial) description
shows its cause.
Iolanthe,
nun alone in that house, though
tsarina over all, and
helped by others,
(Eos and phosphor, radium, oil and candles)
spends her dreams exploring,
keyholes muttering back
“into this house none shall enter.”
Estranged, she looks out the window to see the (fall)
sun delay the dark for the last time,
appearing frail,
no flame left,
dropping low. She watches the fall from
saintly grace. Ancient grace, from time of apples,
ewes, birthright, names like Cain or
Aaron, sun and dust: she sees the fall;
synesthesia between sight and sigh.
___________________________________
modded xbox 360 controller